Mirror mirror on the wall
Am I not the most beautiful?
My locks that flow about my face
My feminine charm and womanly grace.
My eyes they are the brightest blue
They even shame the glimmer of you!
My smile so perfect and whitest teeth
Am I not what every man seeks?
It is true you have beauty on the out
All other women envy you no doubt
However you have one major flaw
Let Me Tell you what I saw
Well as you nodded I will go on
There is one thing about you that is wrong
You are vein and selfish, that is a sin
You are not at all beautiful within.
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I may have a so called idea for
"However you have one major flaw
Do you wish me to tell you more?"
...instead of "Do you wish me to tell you more?", I would go with "Let me tell you what I saw"...just for the rhyme.(it keeps the idea, in a way.)
It has a very good idea and meaning. I often read things that jump from one idea to another in a matter of seconds. Like: My love died...I like muffins. I do it from time to time...I know what I'm saying
In case I was a "wise ass", I apologize. I like the poem a lot
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